Here is that poem that I mentioned the other day. Gilraen wanted me to post it and I said I would on Monday but I just haven't had time till now. Sorry.
Death's Cry
Think me not evil,
my sweet,
for my love for you
is strong
I leave thee not,
becasue of war,
for my life means nothing,
without you
You said once I wasn't
worthy of you,
So I went away crushed by
your words
The haunting look of
your eyes
Played back through
my mind
I fought many fights
for you
My love spurred me on
to die
Wounded and dying
you came
I thought your face was
a dream
But your sweet voice I could
not mistake
the soft touch of your
white hands
New strength I found in
your presence
Your sweet song like life
to my ears
You lifted my hot and
tired head
the lips you pressed to my cheek
were soft
The tears you shed washed
my face
I gained stength but for
one moment
With one last breath
I whispered
My love, think me not evil
in Thy sight
My hand was reached up to
touch you
My fingers ran through
your hair
You laid your forehead
to mine
My last thought was
of you
Do not weep for me,
my love
I died in your arms,
I am happy
Well, like I said its a bit mushy, but you asked for it.
maggio 10, 2006
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A BIT mushy????????
I doubt it. HA
Good poem, actually. For some reason, it reminds me of Arwen & Aragorn, but I haven't a clue as to why...
It flows VERY well. I think it is my favorite poem of yours so far. =)
Well thanks. My best so far? WOW!!! I really surprise myself sometimes. I wasn't even really trying.
Arwen and Aragorn, hmmmmm. But He didn't die, well not like that, not till he was old. But anyhow.
Hey...yeah, I do write like all the poetry on my site (unless otherwise specified). Thanks...I have trouble finding poetry for that particular site, though. Cuz most of my poetry is VEERRRYYY dark.
I dunno why it reminded me of Arwen and Aragorn...it just did. I know it's not the story at all...maybe it's just the tone. I guess I imagined them as the characters when I read it. Whatever. hehe
Keep up the poetry writing! You're getting really good! =)
Thanks again! I will, I don't intend on stopping anytime soon. I'm having new inspirations all the time.
Yeah I know what you mean by the tone, it does kinda go. Especailly since you just saw the Two Towers and you think Aragorn is going to die since they changed it from the book and if you havne't read the book you don't know that he doesn't, except he's kinda' the star and the tittle of the sequel really gives everything away.
But anyhow...
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